words #28

the floor collects mud
like the mind collects stray thoughts.
both need to be swept.


I tried for a rispetto today, and it just wasn’t happening. So I took the idea I had and transformed it into a haiku, which works slightly better. I’ll have to try the rispetto again later. Haikus continue to fascinate me, even though they seem to be my “fall back” poetic form.

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